Sunday, February 7, 2010

The Magic Key

Long ago there was a alien pirate how landed his space ship in Earth he was being followed by another alien pirate ship the only reason was to stole the blackalien’s treasure how hide a mystical power that could do what ever you want it to do.
The alien pirate ship gave the black alien’s treasure with only one purpose a trap the treasure was fake it was only to get ride of the other pirates named clearaliense the all died leaving the treasure hide on the planet earth.
Years later many alien ships arrive to the planet earth to search for black aliens treasure and only one was destined to find it. His name was Jalien and he worked cleaning his father’s ship. He studied geography but by his looks now one believe him his only hope was to
Keep studding till one day he could have a good job.
His passion was searching sins little his mother his things and the always found them the only problem was that nobody gave him a chance only his cat named T.A. but he didn’t talked so in fact no one listens to him. One day cleaning the ship he found an old book so he started reading he told him self” this words don’t make any sense” and he was right 1 day later he discovered another book with missing pages that helped decode the letters in the other book. But the question was why the missing pages.


Well it looks like if someone has already decoded the code but how and why did he took of those pages. The only person that knew those books was Black alien and his cure, he love adventure so he started decoding the code and got to an advertence that he could not understand because of the missing pages.
One night he scope from the ship wile everyone was asleep he took a compass with him that helped him go north and that’s what he did and he food another alien how got lost he told him his plan and they both continued to north and when the got totally north and the compass broke and suddenly they so a shadow that that the Black alien’s ship and when they abounded the pages missing where on the floor and when he finished decoding he knew that the Black alien’s treasure was made specifically for his wife for Black alien his wife the most important thing in the world so he made her a gift that does what ever she wanted to but it doesn’t worked like that his wife had a magical chamber that opened the wish know that he knew the purpose of the mystical power he trough it into the space.
And the legend says that the key is a dark hole than is horrible outside but with love in the inside, and anyone how wants to steal it will be trapped in it for ever and live with a bad beard. To be continued

4 comments:

  1. Hi lisa, i liked to much your work but in some cases you miss words and have spelling mistakes but the story is good.

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  2. It was very good correct your spelling.

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  4. To your story are missing images and you have some spelling mistakes.But your story was good.

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