Sunday, February 7, 2010

With out knowing

One's upon a time there was this beautiful woman, how was so poor. She worked at the mayor’s house. Her rutting was, she got up at 5:00 are she got breakfast that was bread with butter and a glass of water. Then at 5:20am she got a shower and brush her blond and long hair, and put on her golden dress and her almost broken choose. At 5:40 she got out of her house and takes the bus at 5:45. She got to work at 6:00am, on Monday she had to clean the bathrooms, the windows, and the kitchen. On Tuesday she had to clean the rooms, the bathrooms and the backyard. On Wednesday she had to clean the cloth, the batrooms and the dogs and birds house. On Thursdays she had to clean the bathrooms, the pool, the backyard and the kitchen. On Friday she had to clean the bathrooms, the rooms and the backyard. All days she finished at 6:00pm and on Fridays she finished at 9:00pm. When she lost the bus she had to walk at lest 1:20 to get home and her payments was $3 every week. Her passion was dancing, acting and singing. Her dream was impossible to come true, so her solution was a little clay pig were she every week put half of there money. She named the pig, gold, in honor of her need that was gold. She told other people about it they thought she was crazy, that why she didn’t had many friends. Her only friend was Gold and the animals that she had in her house. She knew how to make cloth an extra help of money for her, she design cloth and loved to make art.

The bad thing is that she was been treat bad cause she was a made. She was very tired and she started to stop working because of her bad treating and never got out of her house again, that gave her time to start a knew live with magic she became a wizard and her knew purpose was to get to Mont Olympus to became a goddess. And her name will be Athena so she started inventing things with magic
And she created animals and spiders and on any time that someone told her what to do, what to tank or what to say even when she got mad at someone she always turned them into a horrible ting that she didn’t even know what was it or how to call it she did it because the people how insulted her she turned them into a spider although she didn’t knew why into that horrible thing but she did it.
One day she climb the Mont Olympus and Cues welcome her and gave her witch so know she was a knew goddess named Athena and she was so beautiful and powerfully that the Greek people made a temple for her, that Was the only place Athena could come to see people and her favorite tree was olive tree. And that’s how poor women became the goddess Athena

1 comment:

  1. your story is very interesting check your grammmar and put some pictures

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